Performance Critique: September 20a

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IAvlzht3EY

0m39s Try “now I understand how to apply that expression”

1m37s Say wood chipper at the start of the question

2m20s Good improvising / calling out the situation

3m40s Hard in this room, but be mindful of where the lighting is best

5m57s I can add “hold your applause”

7m45s Nice that the uncomfortable line works again

10m25s Decent double reaction, might be a smoother way to do it

Overall: Ok for a mic. Some stuff did better than others but there were some laughs most of the time.

Performance Critique: September 19b

Going up 2.5+ hours into a show with about 10 audience members left

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=luaU2zAVuIo

1m45s Decent improvised save

2m45s “Hula hoop of despair” is good

4m56s At least the save line works

5m17s My air quotes look weird

Overall: Very weak set, but at least couple of new lines got a decent response.

Performance Critique: September 19a

MCing an open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcvcPEkJMlY

0m28s Try “that finally explains how to make sen of the expression”

2m13s Say “too fast for me”

3m19s Say “here’s a newsflash” with more sarcasm

4m44s Say “upgrade” instead of “new one” and find a less mean way to make this point

6m16s Get the line smoother

Overall: Okay for a mic

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