Opening the 8pm show. Video starts 2 minutes into the set because I didn’t set it up in time
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jt9Kvtp2hg
1m47s Weird delivery in “I was in the baggage check”
3m18s Good improvising
4m38s Good interaction
5m27s Good save to a weird ending of a joke
6m31s Move the mic away faster so they know to ask “why”
9m00s Add a “sir” at the end of it to make it less harsh
Overall: The jokes were hit or miss by the crowd interactions were very solid.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=owcyXs1VfrI
1m29s Try “that one’s not for everyone, it’s only for the girls that I’ll date”
Overall: Good for opening a mic. I did two older bits to setup two new bits.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S3c_8_dVlRs
3m21s Pause between the first two lines
5m50s Nice natural reaction
5m58s And great improvised response
6m56s Eyes should be moving around more wildly and the whole time
Overall: Great set with 3 applause breaks. Two new bits worked pretty well too.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LifZYJRbA0Q
3m30s React a little more to their slight “aww”
4m28s Turn to the side for “no, not a women’s prison” so it feels more like an aside
5m35s Say “why Blade is in prison” instead of “he”
6m04s Could’ve tagged it with “I hope you’re not here with your “girlfriend””
6m42s Shift delivery on the second half of the sentence, that might get an extra laugh
Overall: Solid set.
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A16w_VxR2f4
1m44s I should be more aware of not saying the “I hate your hair” to bald guys
Overall: Good for checks. Was able to do two newer bits.
