Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6UFHrPO67c
1m10s I got the shoes and hair lines backwards
3m19s Point at “neuro divorce” not earlier in the line
Overall: Good for a check spot
Performance Critique: July 16a
Doing a longer set on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xuj1lZ5FktM
1m35s Nice improvised bit
3m15s Address the groan and applause by different parts of the audience right after it happened, not twenty seconds later
4m58s No need for “too” at the end of the sentence
6m53s The psycho smile should show teeth at all times
11m10s Do a little crowd work or normal bit instead of going into a character when there’s a weird slow down
11m50s Nice to know the save line works
12m46s Hold the hand motion for a little longer
13m02s Change the delivery on “bring it”
14m34s Decent response
Overall: Good set, the first eleven minutes were stronger than the last six.
