An 8pm bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iRLtxVSDoQ
1m43s Turn to a different direction for “I love that he’s not disputing it”
2m59s Point it out to the rest of the crowd, not to the person
4m51s Try just moving the eyes, without moving the head
5m09s Smile bigger
6m08s Get rid of the “dah-dah-dah-dah”
7m35s Nice improvised little bit
Overall: Good set, newer mom bits worked decently well
Doing the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tISlqynbsgc
0m22s Good improv to start
2m39s Cut that tag
Overall: Solid set
Opening for an improv group
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HmJERRWOfPk
1m10s Hit the line harder
4m14s Turn to the side for this line, make it more of an aside
5m26s Cut the word “so” at the start, it’ll seem more random
Overall: Eh, weak but steady laughs.
Going last 2.5+ hour into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjRQsuBm7s4
0m46s Respond better with something like “I love that you don’t dispute it”
4m01s Don’t pause mid sentence
4m17s Move my eyes side to side, not my head
4m44s Go straight to “I just got back from” without restating what he said
6m33s Push the mic forward on the punch line
7m01s First say, “she’s cute, good job sir.”
Overall: Weak steady-ish laughs. Connect better at the start.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7t1Ms5Z1bY4
0m22s Milk the face for a little longer
1m17s Pause for another half beat before “it won’t be”
1m40s Say “disputing” instead of “arguing”
5m38s Good improvised line
6m05s Go forward with the mic stand instead of putting my arms out
Overall: The second half was a little better than the first half, but neither was that good.
