The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cKTLbP25F8
0m22s Call out the “woo” more, like “why are you proud of that?” or something
1m35s Good job on dealing with the disruption
4m08s Nice improvised line
5m29s Don’t do a third mom joke when the first two barely got laughs
Overall: Bad set. I got interrupted once and addressed it well but then I continued with my mother material when it was clearly not working, I should’ve tried switching topics earlier
A Friday 6:30 show for ten or fifteen people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aCFfl0BnTbc
2m49s Weird that the plane line completely missed when everything else is hitting
4m47s I improvised “cash only”, I should keep it
6m36s Call out the girl that wooed on it
7m11s Extra explanation of DVR didn’t lead to extra laughs
8m59s Turn to the side for “second door on your right”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4njCXzQ_ms
1m17s Learn to save my closer for the last joke instead of doing it earlier, otherwise I won’t end as strong as I can
Overall: Solid eleven minute set, the DVR relationship joke needs work and the neuro joke still needs some tweeking
A Friday open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BzAu-R4E3aU
1m22s I need something else in there instead of “nice rack”
1m44s Say “girls I hook up with” not just “girls” it’s not clear enough
2m10s Do something instead of broccoli
3m22s Waaaay to wordy, although maybe it’s so wordy that it’s funny
Overall: Average response for an open mic. The millionaire joke needs a better line towards the end.
