“Truth In Comedy” Quotes

I recently read “Truth in Comedy” by Del Close and Charna Halpern, the founders of improvisational comedy and thought I’d post my favorite quotes from it.

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“The truth is funny. Honest discovery, observation, and reaction is better than contrived invention.” (15)

“When we’re relaxing, we don’t have to entertain each other with jokes. And when we’re simply being ourselves up to each other and being honest, we’re usually funniest.” (15)

“Where do the really best laughs come from? Terrific connections made intellectually, or terrific revelations made emotionally.” (25)

“Many actors don’t understand the difference between a joke and a laugh. A joke is only one way – and seldom the best way – to get a laugh; jokes can get laughs but, obviously, laughs don’t always result from jokes.” (26)

“A comedian who tells jokes is basically a salesman, trying to sell the audience a clever story or punch line, while hoping to be paid back in laughter.” (27)

“When players worry that a scene isn’t funny, they may resort to jokes. This usually guarantees the scene won’t be funny.” (27)

“The situation is similar to a relationship between a man and a woman – the more they talk about it, the less time they spend on it.” (28)

“The audience laughs at agreement – a secret of comedy that very few people realize.” (51)

“Improv is much closer to ping pong than it is to chess. Actors create an improv scene in the same spontaneous way.” (71)

“You should always assume that the audience is one step ahead of you.” (72)

“If everyone justifies everyone else’s actions, there are no mistakes.” (73)

“A scene is almost never about what the players think it’s going to be about.” (73)

“No matter what the setup, however, the event is crucial to every scene – the situation that makes this day different from all the rest. This is where the action begins.” (81-82)

“Del said, ‘We don’t care if it works for the audience – it has to work for us,’ “ (83)

“The only real mistake here is ignoring the inner voice.” (91)

“After an improviser learns to trust and follow his own inner voice, he begins to do the same with his fellow players’ inner voices. Once he puts his own ego out of the way, he stops judging the ideas of others – instead, he considers them brilliant, and eagerly follows them!” (92)

“They always accept the ideas of the other players without judging them to be “good” or “bad,” always thinking, “This is now our idea.” (93)

“Objects in a scene are there to help lead a player who feels stuck. They should prompt the improviser to discover, rather than invent.” (104)

“Experienced performers learn that their dialog isn’t about their activity. Instead, the lines should be saved for the relationship with the other player.” (107)

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Performance Critique: December 12

This is me in DC for the second night in a row opening the show for a crowd of around 30

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g0ZWfknFTtM

0m06s I really prefer not to have someone say “he’s just starting out” as I think the audience starts thinking “great he sucks”, that might be my imagination though

0m18s The MC said he’d be babysitting the crowd, so I called back to that

0m30s What were the odds that two nights in a row a woman would have similar hair to me

0m53s That’s slightly mean of me but hysterical

2m26s I need to do another “what the hell” look after “Igor loves this”

2m41s That was an instant improvisation

2m57s Comedians laugh at this setup, but actual audience doesn’t

4m11s Should’ve waited another half second as the second round of laughs were about to start

5m48s A little too mean just because I said it so fast, it wouldn’t have come off as mean if I said it slower and more low key

7m05s I could’ve added a tag of “didn’t they teach “not interrupting” in 1795?”

8m01s I’ve watched this three times, and I laugh every time at my fake singing

8m22s I should’ve responded “too bad you’re not driving”

9m25s The hand motion worked better this time

9m57s Not getting a single laugh on my first punch line here was a bad sign

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qZ56G36F6Rs

0m54s The whole dog joke missed

1m08s This isn’t a joke to go to after I lose the crowd

1m34s I got them back a little bit, but not fully

1m58s Also not a joke to go to if I’m on the brink of losing the crowd

2m47s The delivery is fine, but if I’ve lost the crowd this joke won’t work

3m14s That was a decent fake joke to end it

Overall: Doing well for 10 minutes and sucking for 3 minutes feels like doing well for 3 minutes and sucking for 10. I did really well the first 9 minutes 45 seconds and ate a big fat dick for the last 3 minutes 30 seconds. I went into the dogs joke really randomly, instead of doing a little crowd work about animals first, so the crowd didn’t follow me. I could’ve still won them back but I structure my set so that the “messed up” or “meaner” jokes come towards the end after (presumably) the crowd likes me and lets me get away with more. If I lose the crowd right before the “meaner” stuff it’s not pretty.

Performance Critique: December 11

This is back down in DC at All Stars, crowd of about fifteen people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G12aAJdB9jA

0m11s I’ve left the MC’s intro in here because it’s “unique” and I responded to it to start my set

0m40s Haven’t heard I look like the Brady Bunch before, that’s pretty funny

1m10s Impressive that the intro took over a minute

1m22s Before I was brought up the MC was talking about Skull Vodka for a good five minutes

1m38s A woman had hair similar to mine

2m58s I didn’t even think that was a funny response

3m51s After “are you in an abusive relationship?” I should’ve gone with “I can rescue you”

6m35s Two great improvised lines in a row here, “You can molest me” and “I’ve never been molested… on stage”. I should remember to bring those back for other shows

7m25s Fix the order of the words in the premise

7m40s One too many hand gestures

7m58s This family stuff isn’t hitting as well as the previous

8m43s I was able to bring the crowd back

9m48s Best random audience story I’ve ever heard. I should have gone more into it.

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j0acBqT2lE0

0m12s I should’ve pushed the CD’s thing, like “don’t talk to him about us anymore, we’re over”

1m24s Good improvisation and transition into a joke

2m18s I should’ve gone back to hitting on the girl and asking if she likes the rhythm method here

2m38s I forced this joke in here and shouldn’t have

3m17s I love how I went for the third part of the joke after I said I was right on the line

3m57s The licking of the lips is really making this joke work

4m13s This was where I would’ve wanted to get off stage, but I didn’t get the light yet so I kept going

4m56s The last punch line of neuroeconomics is new and worked well

5m15s This is where I couldn’t think of a next joke to do

6m10s I’m rather impressed with myself that I didn’t have material for over a minute and still seem comfortable

6m32s My transition was so random that an audience member yelled out “what?” I need to work on my transitions.

Overall: The first 14 minutes were pretty good. I was comfortable on stage, switching between talking to the crowd and doing material pretty  seamlessly. A few jokes didn’t hit but I was able to bring the crowd back without losing anyone. The last three minutes weren’t as strong mainly because I hadn’t planned on being on stage that long, although I was still able to get laughs and improvise. I need to practice my whole set more often so it takes me longer to run out of material.

Performance Critique: December 9b

This is for an audience of 7

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uFX2V8F4JhA

0m20s I watched the last two minutes of the comic before me, and came up with a couple of observations to start the set with. This seems to work better than going straight to jokes

1m03s After forty seconds, I go into actual material

2m03s 6 of the 7 audience members were women

3m10s After “we’ll pretend we don’t know each other” I should’ve added “then we’ll meet up around 2am”

3m25s I’m happy the suicide joke is working with women, I was concerned it might not work

3m45s Well that third joke of suicide isn’t working, but that can be fixed

4m36s She said something about pot

4m51s Better response, “I’m not your waiter”

6m25s I think the Russian family joke failed because I mentioned a response of my mom without an accent before getting into the Russian family material, and that confused the crowd

6m31s At least I didn’t go back to Russian jokes after the first part failed

7m30s I should think of different ways of saying “fall in love” so I can keep coming back to it without it getting stale

Overall: I need to be careful about responding as my mom before setting up that she has a Russian accent, or if that occurs, don’t do the Russian accent for the whole set. Also, the first two parts of my suicide joke are getting a strong response.

Performance Critique: December 9a

This is me MCing an open mic with 3 comics in attendance

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oCmNOisGGzY

1m21s First time I’m doing this joke outloud

1m37s And it got a couple of laughs, it has a chance of being funny after a couple of rewrites

3m13s Heavy sarcasm on that statement

3m30s This whole joke needs to be delivered sadder, like I’m actually opening my soul

4m05s I should’ve done the “I told my my that joke, she didn’t understand what was funny” after the “PhD dropout” line

4m49s Didn’t sound shocked enough about the fifty bucks

5m05s Ah, good old work-shopping a joke on stage

Overall: It’s tough to learn too much from a three person open mic, but I think my new joke about being jealous of women has potential. Check back on that joke in 3-4 weeks after I’ve worked on it. I also need to work on the delivery of “parental neglect” and “the morning after pill”.

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