Performance Critique: September 16

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BO7IPTx3KZk

1m01s Change the intonation on the line, emphasize “I”

1m44s I bailed on a bunch of the bit in the middle, remember the whole thing

2m36s Good job addressing the talking

3m02s If I’m not opening with this, I should notice someone eating food to be reminded of this

6m06s No need for “you” before “dick”

9m00s Give them another half second before doing the next bit

10m13s Good job addressing it

Overall: This set seemed much better on video than it felt in person.

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