An open mic with six comedians
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JDO-rGja1wc
0m35s No need for “murderous rage” I can just say “drive me crazy”
2m12s I can get rid of the “2 seconds, 3 seconds” part
2m53s The numbers should be with two digits, not three digits, it’s less syllables
5m29s Get rid of the restaurant part
5m41s This is the second round of open mic
8m09s Change “community service” to “public service”
Overall: I powered through an open mic and although the other comics aren’t really laughing, I can still see what parts of jokes can be cut
