Performance Critique: March 31b

The 10pm show


1m21s Good call back to a previously improvised line

4m04s Emphasize “although”

4m48s Make the setup clearer otherwise the punch lines don’t make much sense

7m47s Tucking the chin in is a good way to show sarcasm without people seeing my eye roll

8m47s More emphasis on “I”

Overall: Solid set, the divorce bit in the middle was weaker but I brought it back and did a good job improvising throughout.

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