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Performance Critique: March 20a

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBBHwi6qU30

0m24s Cut or rework everything after thesaurus

0m49s No need for “international disaster”

3m14s Say “fine” before the surprise

3m41s Cut the plus minus line

Overall: Decent for a going for at a mic

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