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Performance Critique: March 25

This is the same place as the previous night, this time the crowd is 4 or 5 people. 

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hb8hpMzRRgU

0m57s I shouldn’t ask the audience member what he’s thanking god for 

1m58s Good pause on the “or tennis”, you can hear the audience member repeating my joke to his friend 

3m03s That’s two strikes for this joke, one more and it goes to die 

3m45s Good turn of a bad answer 

3m50s Don’t ask if they cheated 

4m29s If the audience isn’t paying to see the show, I’ll use my notes. If they’re paying, I won’t. 

5m45s I shouldn’t deadpan “we can’t be friends” to an audience, or at least tell her I’m kidding

7m55s Don’t ask the first question of “do you guys smoke pot”, assume they do and ask “which one of you smokes the most pot?” this should get a laugh 

Part 2 

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qf9GK2DPf1w

1m10s I’m not sure why I’ve started swaying from left to right in the middle of this 

1m40s I should try to get more excited when I’m proscribing crazy ideas that I believe will improve life for everyone 

2m58s It should be “other circus people” not “other clown people” 

3m25s Figure out a way to say this without getting tongue tied 

3m48s There’s one more line to the joke, but I wasn’t sure they’d laugh and I try to leave on a high note 

Overall: Considering there was a small audience, the set went pretty well. I interacted with them and told the jokes I wanted to tell. The newer jokes about rock paper scissor and protests are working while the office beer mistake joke is bombing.

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