Performance Critique: March 19

The Friday night show at which I’m auditioning for the club owner

1m00s Change “Ilya couldn’t be happier” to something funny

1m45s Get rid of the “crying into a pillow”

2m52s I might need to be less specific and just change it to “hire a hitman”

3m10s Pause longer between each part of my mom’s talking

3m48s Applause breaks during auditions are always nice

4m23s Do a quick knocking sound into the mic first

4m33s Change “power of exfoliating” to something funny

Overall: This went great and is the first set where how I remember it going when getting off stage is the same as how it looks on tape. I got laughs everywhere but in the “Ilya couldn’t be happier” and “power of exfoliation” lines which I will be removing.