A feedback mic
0m38s Think of something else instead of French Fries
0m59s Get something shorter than “Guys you feel lukewarm about”
1m26s Try “You can come with scare-free orgasms”
1m52 I need less words for the punch than “play with fire”
1m59s Change the second example
2m56s This joke might not be worth keeping
Overall: Decent. The Fox News joke will be good when I get the right first two examples, the iPhone throw needs a little work, and the jogging bit might need to be cut.
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