A bar show
2m22s Add “because” before “Jesus would’ve wanted…”
5m44s Too wordy
6m41s Decent call back
Overall: Decent, but not great. I tried doing a lot of mom stuff in a row and it got a bit repetitive, even
for me.

A bar show

2m22s Add “because” before “Jesus would’ve wanted…”

5m44s Too wordy

6m41s Decent call back

Overall: Decent, but not great. I tried doing a lot of mom stuff in a row and it got a bit repetitive, even for me.

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