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Performance Critique: January 21c

Doing a check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://youtu.be/6jdKhjBbzBo

0m52s More emphasis on “someone”

1m10s Get better posture, neck is too far forward

1m25s I can add “I didn’t even know the internet had other websites”

3m59s Say “it’s called the contract year” before “imagine how good marriages would be in a contract year.”

4m48s Add “accidently” before started

5m34s Change “twelve” to “ten” for less syllables

Overall: Decent for checks

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