Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrRHz_rV1OE
0m45s After “that only took like ten seconds” say, “now we can cuddle”
3m29s Sound a little more excited about the impression
5m42s Do a smoother setup for this joke
6m11s Do walk to the back of the runway like a model would do
8m46s Get a better chart to end the joke on
10m05s Commit harder to the dance
Overall: Eh. The corporate girl joke worked well, everything else had a weak response.