Performance Critique: December 17

Another weekday show

0m21s The previous comic spent 3 minutes preaching about the virtues of anal

0m46s He said “not that she knows”

1m17s This is great

1m28s I don’t usually have the audience clap, but I thought this was the best way to transition from crowd work to material in this instance

3m15s I don’t need to say “my family isn’t happy I’m in comedy” I can go straight to introducing my mom’s line

3m58s I put too much emphasis on the word “all”

5m11s Not a terrible callback to previous crowd work, but it could’ve been stronger

5m29s Good job milking the sadness

5m44s I hate getting tongue tied

Overall: This was a very solid set. Finding out the guy stalked his girlfriend of seven years and milking that fact for the first minute was a lot of fun and helped get everyone in the moment. It was great that I was getting stronger and stronger laughs the longer I kept going.