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Performance Critique: December 15

A Tuesday show for a crowd of 11

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ghgtVpDVDEU

1m01s One of these days I’m gonna get random audience members to make out during my set

1m06s I couldn’t do my regular “don’t try (insert dating service)” cause it would’ve been mean given how she looked, so I tried to save it by adding more words

1m14s I setup my suicide joke here, but it was too early to go to it, so the transition was a little weird

2m25s Do the mouse click slower and more dramatically

3m00s I held back here. My first instinct was to ask “have you done it yet” and then enquire about her fake rack. It would’ve also made sense to ask how they met here, suggesting a site like “sugar daddies and big boobs dot com” because of how they looked and then going into my online dating joke.

3m30s I tried changing the order of the Russian family stuff here and it led to me stumbling over the premises

4m28s I love the single applause clap

5m44s Admitting it’s messed up lets me get away with going further, I learned that in improv

7m08s I still don’t have a good response for when someone hasn’t spayed their dog

7m43s My hand should be out in a “presenting” way, not in a double pump motion

Overall: This was the first time in a while where my material did well but my improvised crowd work didn’t. I think this was because I didn’t go with my first instinct in a couple of moments as I decided my instincts were too mean. Also, changing the order of the Russian Family joke makes sense but I need to make it smoother.

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