This is back down in DC at All Stars, crowd of about fifteen people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G12aAJdB9jA
0m11s I’ve left the MC’s intro in here because it’s “unique” and I responded to it to start my set
0m40s Haven’t heard I look like the Brady Bunch before, that’s pretty funny
1m10s Impressive that the intro took over a minute
1m22s Before I was brought up the MC was talking about Skull Vodka for a good five minutes
1m38s A woman had hair similar to mine
2m58s I didn’t even think that was a funny response
3m51s After “are you in an abusive relationship?” I should’ve gone with “I can rescue you”
6m35s Two great improvised lines in a row here, “You can molest me” and “I’ve never been molested… on stage”. I should remember to bring those back for other shows
7m25s Fix the order of the words in the premise
7m40s One too many hand gestures
7m58s This family stuff isn’t hitting as well as the previous
8m43s I was able to bring the crowd back
9m48s Best random audience story I’ve ever heard. I should have gone more into it.
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j0acBqT2lE0
0m12s I should’ve pushed the CD’s thing, like “don’t talk to him about us anymore, we’re over”
1m24s Good improvisation and transition into a joke
2m18s I should’ve gone back to hitting on the girl and asking if she likes the rhythm method here
2m38s I forced this joke in here and shouldn’t have
3m17s I love how I went for the third part of the joke after I said I was right on the line
3m57s The licking of the lips is really making this joke work
4m13s This was where I would’ve wanted to get off stage, but I didn’t get the light yet so I kept going
4m56s The last punch line of neuroeconomics is new and worked well
5m15s This is where I couldn’t think of a next joke to do
6m10s I’m rather impressed with myself that I didn’t have material for over a minute and still seem comfortable
6m32s My transition was so random that an audience member yelled out “what?” I need to work on my transitions.
Overall: The first 14 minutes were pretty good. I was comfortable on stage, switching between talking to the crowd and doing material pretty seamlessly. A few jokes didn’t hit but I was able to bring the crowd back without losing anyone. The last three minutes weren’t as strong mainly because I hadn’t planned on being on stage that long, although I was still able to get laughs and improvise. I need to practice my whole set more often so it takes me longer to run out of material.
