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Performance Critique: April 10a

Saturday afternoon mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gaQCFZ7xFUM

0m16s The MC was doing an impression of “bad MCing” so I wanted to add that in, that failed

0m44s Don’t say subtle twice

1m04s Keep the handshaking going for all three characters without stopping

1m15s Put in the word “future” before children

1m37s No need for “dollar” in there

2m36s No need for the word “can” just “If you convince…”

2m48s Instead of “means” I should say “takes”

3m31s Get rid of the organic brownie part

4m39s I screwed up the start of it by actually saying his name

5m01s I didn’t explain the technique well enough before doing it

Overall: I need to say newer jokes out loud at least three times before doing them at mics, or else too many words get flubbed.

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